Mystery Story Similes

This term we are writing mystery stories.  We are coming up with some juicy similes to make our writing awesome.

Check these out!!
 The day was as dark as a blck panthers shadow.  By Richie
The villain was as sneaky as a slithering snake.  By Charlotte
The villain was as sneaky as an owl stalking a little brown mouse in the deep dark woods.  By Sammy
It was as terrifying, as seeing a snake rip a rat to pieces.  By Sarah
The detective was brave like a new born baby taking his first steps.  By Richie
We walked a quietly as a leaf hitting the ground.  By Jade
The villain was as sneaky as a king cobra stalking its prey.  By Taianu
Everything was invisible like your in a black world.  By McKaren
It was as scary as a storm that struck Christchurch in the middle of the night.  By Sarah
It was as quiet as a pin dropping.  By Tessa
I was as brave as a firefighter going into a flaming building saving people.  By Keira
The villain was as quiet as a person playing silent ball. By Taianu
The villain was as sneaky as mouse looking for cheese.  By Trisha
 The day was as dark as a deep dark shadow creeping up on me.  By Nikita
We crept up to the man like a spider creeping towards his next meal.  By Kiarn
He was as loud as a hippopotamus yawning.  By Tessa
The detective was as brave as a mouse stealing cheese next to a cat.  By Paris
He was a loud as an elephant crying. By Charlotte
I searched fro clues as quickly as a rapid bushfire burning through a forest.  By Ethan
The Villain was as sneaky as a stalking crocodile.  By Samson
He crept like a lion hunting deer, through the long slick grass in Africa.  By Sammy